Peer and Self Assesment of First Draft

Magazine Feedback - Peer and Self Assessed.

 

Here is some feedback I gave myself today in class, I also asked a few of my other classmates opinons on my magazine and I filmed them for you to see. My classmates told me some things they liked about the magazine as well as somethings they think I can improve on. I plan to act on this feedback and make as many changes as I can to make my magazine as professional as possible.

Rule Of Thirds

Production Diary 14

 

This week I have been further working on my coursework to try and improve it. I have started to put all my screenshots of my work together to create a short video on Premiere, which wont be up on my blog until I have completed my magazine, as it shows session by session what I have done, so you can see my improvement every lesson. I have also started to Photoshop some of magazine photos, removing any marks such as spots, sorting out color balances and adding and removing things. For example I added hair to one of the pictures of my models as her hair looked to straight and flat.